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                              from ...Troubling Tales to Relax With
 
(from Story Two, pp.94-96)               "That Good Image"
 
                    “But, now,” continued the interviewer, “I’d really like to get a sense of
             the sentiments you developed in those early years regarding the races. You
             know…maybe  you can state how your early experiences in the culture of
             Pigs Bend shaped your thinking about race.”
                     He  knew  it  was  coming, that is, Mr. Redd did. Taking one relaxed
             but deliberate step after another down the road with his escort, Billie Redd
             prepared  his  answer.  As was his custom, he would be direct, honest and
             unapologetic.
                   “Grandpop  used  to  say the coloreds was like monkeys, but in a hu-
             man kind a’ way, sorta’.” Focusing on specific memories, Billie Redd con-
             tinued.  “Yep,  that’s what he used to say…I can hear him now, ‘Damned
             monkeys!’”  The  old man  stopped his gait and scratched his head before
             continuing.  “Now,  that’s  some’em--.   I’ll  be damned.  …I ain’t thought
             on that in a long time.  …Ol’ Grandpop.
                    “Now,  I  had seen some monkeys,” continued Mr. Redd. “you know,
             heuhr  and  theyuhr… people comin’ around with monkeys doin’ tricks for
             money…stuff  like  that. But—no disrespect to Grandpop—I couldn’t see
             no real likeness between coloreds and no damned monkeys.  I mean, hell,
             if  it  was some, it won’t no more than the monkeyin’ around I done seen
             white people do on this or that ‘ccasion.
                    “But, you see, Mr. Vernon, I had a lot of respec’ for Grandpop, and
             I  honored his opinion. I s’ppose I jes’ believed I didn’t have his wisdom.”
                    Vernon nodded. “I see. Please continue.”
                    “Now,  Pop  used  to  say  they  was  like, as  he put it, ‘little bad ass
             children,’  and  white  people  had  to direct ‘em and teach ‘em their place,
             so they didn’t get too wild and out of control. I can hea’uhr him now jawin’
             with  folks  on  the front porch of our old house. They’d all agree: coloreds
             had  a wild nature, they said, havin’ come from the jungle and all. Pop said
             you  had  to  tame them jungle instincts or they’d go buck wild and destroy
             everythang the white man built up in this country.”
                    “Did you come to feel the same way?” asked Vernon when the inter-
             viewee paused.
                    “Oh,  hell-yeah.  It  was  easy  to  believe  that coloreds was diff’rent
             from  us  jes’ from the looks of ‘em. The dark skin, the noses, the hair, the
              …you  know…the  whole  face …and they didn’t act like white people.”
              Billie  Redd  thought   on it a few seconds. “You know what it was? They
              seemed like people what belonged somewheres else. Not monkeys, like
              Grandpop used to say, but people who didn’t fit the white man’s land—
              that is, if he wasn’t , you know, heuhr as a slave.”
                    Billie Redd stopped abruptly and engaged Vernon with a serious gaze.
              “Now  you  know,  that’s  a  funny  thang  how we looked at that thang in
              them  days, Mr. Vernon. The coloreds fit in the white man’s so-ciety as a
              servant  and  a  slave  but  outside that condition, we felt they was out of
              their  place.  Hell, as far as we were concerned, since they ended slavery,
              we’d  all  be  better  off  if  the  coloreds could all go back to Africa and
              leave America to us whites.”
                     Continuing  the  journey,  the interviewee resumed dialogue. “And I’ll
              tell  you  some’em…our  folks  often talked about ways we could get the
              coloreds  out  of  America  and back where they come from. And yeuhrs
              later,  one  of  the  leaders  of the coloreds said some’em in a speech that
             showed up in our newspaper down heuhr. So, I’m readin’ it and goddamn
              if  it  took  me back to those days when Pop and them used to talk about
              gettin’ the coloreds out and back to the jungles.”
                     “Humph…that’s  interesting.  Who was it and what was it…that was
              said?” asked Vernon.
                    Scratching his head as he recalled the words, Mr. Redd spoke. “That
              rascal  said  some’em  about the government havin’ secret fears of any…
              you know…what is it…mi-grationmass mi-gration of coloreds back
              to  Africa.  …And…so aftuhr a while I start to thinkin’, there jes’ might
              be some’em in what that ol’ varmint is mouthin’ off. See, such a idea
              as  that  nevuhr  once  tapped  us on the head, back when we was talkin’
             ‘bout how to move the coloreds out.”
                    “Humph…so who was it, making the statement?"
                    “It  was  that  Malcolm X  fella’, Billie Redd replied conversationally.
              …How much do you know about ‘im?”
                     “Not a whole lot…I have a general idea of what he was about.”
                     “I’ll  tell  you  this,  Mr. Vernon.  If  Pop and his ol’ boys had got any
              idea that top levels of the gov’ments had some secret policy of snuffin’ out
              plans to get the coloreds back to Africa, there would a’ been a whole hell-
              of-a-lot-a fireworks. And I mean real fireworks. Hell, in them days, it did-
              n’t  take  much  for  folks to start talkin’ ‘bout gatherin’ up some men and
              payin’ a visit to some of them gov’ment rascals.”
                     Walking  along  the  gravelly roadside and recording his subject, Ver-
              non  noted in the distance the people of the area standing on their porches
              or working in their lawns. He attributed their long gazes to small town curi-
              osity  concerning  an  obvious  stranger  in the midst. To the extent that he
              could make out their expressions, they seemed a mixture of neutrality and
              dourness as they tracked movement of the ambling pair.
                     Vernon  realized, as the farthest images in scenery behind shrank to a
              blur  that he hadn’t asked about the distance involved in this walk to town
              center.  Just  as  he  was  planning  such an inquiry, suddenly, from behind
              came the sound of a barking dog. Charging with apparent menace, it caus-
              ed  both  men to turn abruptly to face the threat. The thirty pound mongrel
              bared formidable teeth as he voiced his displeasure with the interlopers.
                     “Get  the  hell  out a’  here,  you little bastard!” roared Billie Redd as
               he  gestured  forward  in  a  mock countercharge. After executing a slight
               backward  motion, the hound stood his ground, but his vocalizations now
               were only sparse and halfhearted.
                      “Damn  idiots  don’t have the sense to keep their dogs off the road!”
                     Vernon  took note that Mr. Redd’s comment was directed apparent-
              ly  at  his own  race, since, from all appearances, the area was exclusively
              white.
              (pp. 94-96)

 from Story One, "Home Improvement"

(pp.13-15)

 

   Four of  the ship’s five new passengers stir-red  groggily  in  their  rest-inducing,  reclining postures,  within  the chair-like structures that were  in fact physical rehabilitation apparatus-es.  Surrounding  their forms entirely were the enveloping  halos  that  nourished their bodies with regenerative waves of energy. They also protected  the external environment from per-nicious   organisms,   characteristic  of  Earth-bound creatures. Marquis Wilks was the first to set his eyes hazily, though without real per-ceptual   comprehension,  on  the  two beings standing a few yards away in the distance.

   As his focus sharpened, Marquis saw what appeared to be two female figures, each near-ly 1.4 meters in height. They seemed slight of form, fragile even, within silken cloaks of met-allic luster that stretched from the tops of their necks down to the silver floor. As if painted a splendid  platinum gold, the skin of their faces appeared  perfectly  smooth and unblemished. Over their heads they wore an adornment that extended from the forehead back, terminating beneath the collar of the body wear.

   The eyes which gazed at one and another of the  five  stowaways were large, mostly black and  almond  shaped  and  overshadowed the other  features.  Less  prominent were the slits that  represented  their  mouths  and the small protuberance  and  tiny  twin  holes  that were their noses and nostrils.

   In addition to his discernment of the strange creatures, Marquis was becoming increasingly aware  of  his  eerie environment: the encasing halo,  his  four  seated  companions  and  their bubble-like   fields,   the  large  gray-lit  room. With  much  relief,  he  noted  that  one of  the people stirring to full wakefulness around him was the girl who, earth hours earlier, he felt he could  not  live without. In an attitude of nerv-ous  humor,  Marquis noted that he was likely not in Baton Rouge any more.

   The spectacle of the setting, as her mind be-gan  acutely  to process it, provoked in Lucin-da  an  automatic response. She reached sud-denly  over,  breaching  both her own and her husband’s low-voltage electrical field to clasp his  wrist.  Fortunately,  the halo-fields simply joined  at the point of intersection and did not rupture.  In  the  maneuver,  Lucinda rose up-ward from recline, a startled expression over-taking  her  face. Aware that Craig continued his deep slumber, she wondered in an instant how  she  was  going  to  meet  this new chal-lenge.

   Of  the  four waking members seated within the weird, gray-lit expanse, Mr. Mendel alone felt  no  fearful  alarm.  It had become his cus-tom,  his  style,  of sorts,  to analyze situations gradually,  rather  than move hastily to conclu-sions. As he assessed it, he could not remem-ber  ever feeling better than he did at the pre-sent time. It was as though he had awakened from  a long, totally refreshing sleep, a king’s sleep  after  which one might expect an awak-ening to royal matters to be confronted. Even the  sight  of  the  creatures  didn’t damper his fanciful  frame  of mind. He just hoped that his optimistic, unworried disposition would not be too   thoroughly   crushed  if  reality,  at  some point, began to bite and clamp down hard.

   The maneuver Chanice was about to under-take  had been successfully executed seconds earlier  a  few  meters away. Without realizing that  fact,  however,  she  reached over within her  gently vibrating halo, penetrated the adja-cent  one,  and clutched Marquis’ sleeve. The sight   of   the  slowly   approaching   Ezsoans made  her heart race in a mode simulating ter-ror. Soon, she could hear soft guttural sounds emitting  from  the  creatures’  barely  opened mouths.

 

Gypsum Reef: “Well, they’re awake.”

 

Lynda Castor: “They are indeed…except, of course, for the one existing simultane-ously in two states. I examined his cellular-activity monitor. There may be just barely enough organization and energy in his neural system to execute a brief moment or two of conscious communication. This is one of those cases, wouldn’t you say, wherein impending death is kind of sad.”

 

Gypsum Reef: “Yyyes…but of course the sadness isn’t over him, given what we know about DEATH. It’s actually only sad for her…considering that she looses her closest partner and ally. ‘Loss’ is almost always sad…for a time.”

 

Lynda Castor: “Those three there look as if they’d like to make a mad dash for any portal they could find, in escape. They’ll discover soon enough that movement much beyond the stretch of their limbs is quite impossible—at least for now.”

            A light smile took sudden form across the slit of Miss Castor’s mouth, as she con-tinued.

  “Look how they’re all staring at us. You can tell they’re trying to understand what we’re saying. Look at them…they are so CUTE…in an oversized way. So, you know, Gypsum, we created this…situation. Have you given any thought about the solution we might devise, to bring before the Com-mander? You know he’ll be asking for it soon enough.”

 

Gypsum Reef: “Yes, ma’am, I know. Quite frankly, I haven’t focused a lot on it. I’m just content, for now, that we were able to persuade the group to extricate each of them from their Weed-spawned perils. Maybe I’ll give it more thought just before sleep. [She shifted her eyes to the new pas-sengers.] …They’re quite intelligent, as you know. You can see it in their eyes. Look at them! ‘Flora’ of Home-One…right up close…in person! Wow. I mean, it is one thing to watch them on the screens…but here they are, in person, just meters away!”

 

Lynda Castor: “I know. It’s simply…mega fantastic!  …Uh, you’ve heard that a number of our crew have caught wind of their presence by now. And they’re going to positively insist on viewing this group for themselves…and I don’t blame them.

   "Wow…our Home-One cousins! You know, seeing them and feeling their com-plexity of emotions makes our usual King-dom Plantae-reference to them seem…well…a bit of an insult. I mean, the analo-gy still seems appropriate with regard to those Weeds dominating regions of Home-One, but for these four—not the case.

   “I think I’m going to stop calling them Flora—‘lv,’ ‘nv,’ or otherwise. They’re…our cousins! The imaging techniques have revealed that they carry the genetic code of Second Vision. And Lucinda, there, has even managed to pass it on, in one or an-other stage of bloom, to her offspring. Our brief aerial observation of them allowed the determination. And she accomplished the feat in spite of her mate’s ‘lv-’ status. Of course, having ‘low-level’ Second Vi-sion is better than having no ‘sv’ at all.”

 

Gypsum Reef: “There’s no question about that. Functioning as an ‘nv’ Earth Weed is to live the greedy life of soil-robbing QUACK GRASS, THISTLES, and GROUND IVY. It is to exist virtually and philosophically as a wasteful and malevo-lent fungus on the land.”

   It  was clear to the four fully awake passen-gers  that the two “creatures” were communi-cating  with  one  another  with those low-vol-ume  throat  sounds. While thoroughly in awe of the two beings and the new environment in general,  their  thoughts began to go on excur-sion.  In  a  synchronicity of which the quartet was  unaware,   their  minds  sought  to  make clarifying  connections. They strove to link the spectacle  before them with memories of their last  experience  on  Earth. With increasing ill-ease,  they reviewed those final events, occur-ring  perhaps  just  hours  earlier, that  should surely have lead to their respective deaths.

 

 from Story Three, "Last Meeting at Frannies' "

(pp.165-168  )

 

    “Oh,  finally  you remember an exact age…even  a  birthday.  Okay,  that’s  really good.” Actually the detective was thinking: Well, that was   transparent  as  hell…nothing  like  a convenient sudden moment of recall, deliv-ered  on  cue.  “So,  Felicia’s the career con artist.  What’s  she  look  like again? I believe you said she’s pretty average in every way, in appearance?”

   “Well,  I think I told you she’s a little plump …yeah, she’s kind of chubby…and she’s ve-ry  likeable.  I  would  say extremely persona-ble…and  that’s probably why she’s so good at,  sort  of,  inducing people to part with their money and valuables.”

   “She ever steal anything from you?”

   “No…I  don’t  think  so.” Taking in the an-swer, Stephanie was thinking, Good, an hon-orable  con  artist—just what I need to re-store my faith in humanity.

   “Hair  length,  style  and  color,  at  your last meeting?”

   “Not quite shoulder length, blondish, kind of down around her face.”

   “Ms.  Fragg,  how is it that you could detect such   detail  with  your  extremely  limited  vi-sion?” Stephanie suspected what Ms. Fragg’s answer  might  be  but  wanted to observe her reaction.

   Indeed,  the  host  suddenly  seemed almost distressed.   Nevertheless,   she  managed  an answer.  “I know them so well, Miss Mousse. And  when  they’re  here,  I  sit  with  them  in bright   light  and  I  do  look  directly  at  their faces.   You   know   I  can   see   colors  and shapes....”

   “What color is my hair?”

   “I’ve  seen  your  hair against a background of  bright  daylight,  so  I  know  it’s a reddish brown.  Right  now,  though, your whole form just appears dark.”

   So far, the detective was not able to find the damning flaw she sought, in her host’s general credibility.  In spite of her search for inconsis-tencies,  she could find no significant deviation from   the   descriptions  given  earlier  by  the want-to-be    informant.    Nevertheless,   she could  not  disconnect  from strong suspicions that   the   four  supposed  criminal  associates were in fact fictitious.

   Before standing and announcing termination of  the fact finding session, Stephanie Mousse began  a  final  round  of  inquiries.  The focus now   was   on  Frances’  impressions  of  her friends’  early-life  circumstances  and their e-motional compositions.

   “Any of them, other than Astasia, ever offer significant  information about their lives before meeting  you,  as  you  recall?  Anything more that  you  can  tell me about backgrounds and individual personalities could be helpful.”

   “I know that Feli’s parents used to be fam-ous musicians—both of them. They played all over the country and even abroad. I’m sorry I don’t  know  their  names or what instruments they   played.  But  Feli  said  they  played  to sold-out audiences.”

   Following  that  little  expose,  the  detective was  thinking, Uh-oh, here we go…it’s com-ing out now—fantasyland. “Okay, that’s in-teresting,” she said matter-of-factly. “Go on.”

   “Feli   said   she  always  felt  neglected  by them.  They  used  to  leave  her with different people,  while  they  played  various perform-ances. She always said she knew she put on a happy  and  cheerful  face  on  the outside but that she was always really sad inside.”

   “Yes, I guess I can see that…deep feelings of rejection and all.  …And, the others--?  …Anything--?”

   “Astasia’s hard…cold inside. She is so an-gry  all  the  time,  it  seems.  I think her father was  in  shipping?  It  seems  like  she  said he owned  or  was  the  head  of a shipping busi-ness, transporting goods across the oceans to companies in various countries.”

   “You  have  any  idea why she is, or seems, so angry?”

   “Well…her  mother, I think, was kind of an actress,  like  maybe  sort  of  small  parts  or something?  So…and  I  think  she  was  very beautiful  and  had  many  affairs with famous actors,   while  her  husband  was  at  work  a lot…operating  his s hipping business. And al-so,  she  was  jealous that Astasia was growi-ng up to be the prettier of the two. It was like she  could  see  that  Astasia  would  one day overshadow  her.  Instead  of  being proud of her, she seemed to always show resentment. I think  she  thought  Astasia could become the real movie star she was never able to be.”

   The detective’s skepticism was turning sec-ond  by  second  to total disbelief. It was now just  a matter of enticing her host into a verbal trap. Certain that Frances had offered enough random  and  disjointed  information  to  allow maneuvering her into blatant contradiction, the detective began her gambit.

   “What  an  intriguing  set  of  circumstances! Okay!  Finally,  now—unlike the others—I’m starting  to get a clear picture of Astasia. You know  what she and her parents sound like to me?  …I’m seeing the typical, glamorous, yet slander-ridden,  Hollywood  family. Is that an accurate assessment?”

   “Yes….”

   “Then, it sounds now as though you’re say-ing  they  were  all  natives  of this country—California residents even. How is a Russian connection worked into all this?”

   Frances  thought  a  few  seconds,  and then responded.  “Well,  see,  I  think  she said her mother  gave  birth  to  her  during one of their trips  to  the  west coast; then they returned to Russia right afterward. I think they just travel-ed back and forth a lot.”

   Oh,  you  are  a  clever  one,  aren’t  you, thought  the  detective  to herself. Circumstan-ces implied by this last report could explain or link  together  any  number  of  confusing  and nebulous  issues.  Suddenly,  the Russian sex-slave  issue  with Astasia came to mind. Now the  detective  wondered if she should explore that matter further. After some seconds, how-ever, she decided quietly, I think not.

   “Okay, what’s Rocky like? Is there anything more  you  can say concerning his personality, his childhood maybe?”

   “No…not really…other than I think he’s al-ways been very confident.  …He was the ap-ple  of  his parents’ eye. I think he robs banks just to prove that he’s smarter than other peo-ple.  Maybe  it’s  a  superiority complex. You ever heard of people like that?”

   “Yes,  I  think I know the type. Alright, Ms. Fragg, I’ve pretty much reached my time limit for  taking  your  information.  As  I gather my few things here from the table, maybe you can give  me  a  little something extra on Necra as we  kind  of  wrap  up  and  make  way to the front door.”

   “I think he was just the ‘black sheep’ of his family…a  big  family,  too,  according to him. He was wayward…headstrong…out of con-trol. He just ran away from home and started living by his wits…something like that.”

   “Um-hmm. What about siblings? You ever meet  any  sisters  or  brothers?  Any of them ever speak of sisters or brothers?”

   “No…if they have any, they never spoke of them.”  Suddenly,  it seemed to Stephanie that Ms. Fragg’s   eyes   became   glassy,   almost moist with her last commentary.

   As  she spoke, Frances saw the faint outline of   her  interviewer  standing,  concluding  the process.  The  latter  thanked  her host for the information  provided.  In turn, Frances stood and  began  a  concerted walk with the detec-tive  into  the  living  room.  Detective Mousse assured  the  elder  woman again that she and other officers would duly investigate all her re-ports.

   Just to continue relevant conversation as she stood with a hand on the doorknob, Stephan-ie  asked  without  real  interest  in the answer: “Do  you  anticipate  being in the company of these  folks  anytime  soon,  or for that matter, anytime in the reasonably foreseeable future?”

   “I don’t…well, yes, actually, they have cal-led and plan to meet here for a visit this com-ing Sunday.”

 

 

 

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