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from Story One, "The Office Manager"

(pp.39-44)

 

   Monica shared with Kellie a fact that was long a source of agitation for her. She always felt that her intellectual growth had been impeded somehow during her childhood. Though difficult for her to explain, the feeling was that her po-tential, her blossoming acumen, had been sup-pressed at critical junctures of her life. But even if it were true, she admitted, she had no inci-dents in memory upon which to hang her suspi-cions. With initial embarrassment she confided a related belief: It was that, based on the pat-tern of her associations as far back as she could remember, she must have a need to as-sociate with supposed intellectuals. From there she revealed her secret romance with a college professor, a man twenty years her senior.

   “Whoa,” Kellie uttered leaning in, excitedly enthralled, “is he…he’s not…mmmaaar--?”

   “No, he’s div…well, almost divorced…and very, very, very separated.”

   “ ‘Very, very, very’…where’s his wife, on the moon?” The latter educed Monica’s laughter and Kellie continued. “Just kidding…I think I know what you mean. So, I assume the rela-tionship is being kept in the shadows to pre-serve his image at the college?”

   “Yes, sort of, kind of.   …Sooo…well, what do you think about the age difference? You think I should be more concerned about it?”

   “Now, that’s a tough one for me to give an o-pinion on, given that my ‘ex’ has close to twen-ty years on me. I don’t know that age played any significant role in our…you know, coming apart.”

   “So what did happen between you,” asked Monica with concern, “was it some major thing like an affair…or just a gradual process of things going south?”

   “Well, it was both actually, minus the affair. Let’s see if I can put it in a nutshell. Geoffrey Grovensteen has always been his parents’ golden boy. You know… ‘the sun rises and sets’ thing. So, he’s born into a family of doc-tors and pharmacists and practitioners in this and that medical field, and they’re all highly successful and well to do. But as it turns out, Geoff doesn’t have his gifts manifest in academ-ic prowess, in accord with the family legacy. No, his genius is much more heavily weighted in his people skills.

   “So instead,” Kellie continued, “of following di-rectly in the footsteps of his father and grand-father and slew of aunts and uncles, that is, completing medical school, he just decided one fine day to detour from that path. The elder Grovensteens’ only son turned in his medical textbooks to pursue a career that would at once allow use of his craftiness of mind and his high-ly personable style.”

   “What…did he become some kind of PR man?”

   “Uh…yes, sort of. He worked his way into the sales department of a major pharmaceutical company. See the connection? A family of medical practitioners…and a ‘mole’ in the med-ical supply industry? Well, in short, he did quite well…by no means a disgrace to the family.”

   “Okay. So he spent so much time seizing lu-crative contracts for his company that he neg-lected his home,” Monica asked.

   “Well, no. He put in a lot of hours, but that wasn’t one of the two conditions that I identify as dooming our marriage. First, Geoffrey is ex-tremely competitive…one who believes he can outthink and outsmart anyone on a good day.”

   “Uh, oh, don’t tell me he imagined himself to be on your level.”

   “Of course not…he thought he was way smarter. So after some point it became a mat-ter of him appearing always to want to show his superiority of mind. When I turned out to be ‘right’ in a dispute, it seemed to shake him to the core. I got to the point where I would just avoid situations of the sort. It was really bi-zarre—he was so arrogantly confident and at the same time so fragile.”

   “Humph,” sounded Monica, trying to imagine undergoing such a marital ordeal. “What was the other thing that put the marriage in troubles?”

   “The tie-clip,” breathed Kellie in a sigh.

   “The what?”

   “The diamond-studded tie-clip. A two-thou-sand dollar gift from Mother Grovensteen, de-signed to be the lucky piece that would put Geoff over the top in turning a deal to benefit his company. It was part of a wedding gift set, given way back in…’91 or so, for Geoff and his first wife, Andrea. So, the legend is, he was highly successful in most business meetings when he wore it. I’ve already told you about his first wife’s heart condition and her passing six years later…in ’97 and how Geoff and I met and mar-ried in 2002.”

   “Um-hm. And you two adopted little Conner, given Geoffrey’s diagnosed sterility.”

   “Yep. And as I said before, we had some sep-arations in the year following the adoption. But

what I didn’t tell you was that the tie-clip caus-ed the first separation—as well as ended the last. See, one of the chores I took on solely in Geoff’s behalf was taking the tie-clip to be cleaned on occasion by the jeweler’s shop where it was bought. It was quick and inexpen-sive. Well, the darned thing turned up missing one day right after Geoff gave it to me to take for cleaning. He actually accused me of ‘losing’ it on purpose—said he suspected that I was re-sentful of his mother’s, kind of, doting on him and wanted to get back. Can you believe that?”

   “What a jerk.”

   “So, that issue just kind of exploded all out of proportion and mushroomed into a major fight. And I just had had enough…and…I just let go. We both pulled out all the stops that night in our arguing.” Kellie was seeing the scene in her mind, her eyes starting to moisten. “Conner was asleep in his room. We would never have fought like that in his presence.”

   “So, then you separated, which was the first time…and he left?"

   “Yes, he left and eventually got a small apart-ment to live out of…but it was like ‘pseudo’ sep-aration, since he was free to come back when wanted. I knew he really wanted to be home so I didn’t mind the back and forth. You know, I thought about it a lot and I think Geoff really just couldn’t adjust well to the difference between his first wife and me. My reality is…unsettling to some people.”

   “Your reality?”

   “Well, most people interpret the world in terms of what makes them feel good or comfort-able.” Monica’s expression conveyed that she did not at all comprehend Kellie’s statement. “But you know, that subject is a big leap away from our present topic, so I’d like to graciously leave it hanging, if I may. I can…if you’re inter-ested… talk more about that later. Right now, though, I just can’t.”

   “Oh, you must by all means, as soon as you are ready.” Monica was adamant.

   “You know, I feel that I’ve been going on and on about me. Let’s, sort of, switch over to ‘Mon-ica’s world’. How did you and the college pro-fessor make the transition from the classroom to evening dinner dates? I just realized, you haven’t told me his name.”

   “No, wait. You never got to how the necktie-clip brought on the final separation and the de-cision to end the marriage.”

   “Well, now, that’s kind of a lengthy story, you know? I’d really rather save it for another get-to-gether. Going over those last…events are start-ing to get me down. But, so as not to just leave you hanging, I will tell you that the last night Geoff and I were together in our home, his home now, it ended with us both going to jail. We were both released, though, the next day.”

   “What?! Oh, my God!”

   “Calm down. There was no violence or any-thing. I promise to tell you the whole convoluted set of events, tie-pin and all, the next time we talk. Right now, I’m just not up for it. You know …bad memories and all.”

   Monica spoke in mild exasperation, “God, Kellie…you sure know how to…well I under-stand. Okay, okay, okay, okay,” she iterated in rapid succession, gathering her thoughts for the discourse requested a half minute earlier. As a clarification, Monica asked, “I did make it clear, didn’t I, that Stuart…Dr. Stuart Burgess…was my fundamentals of physics and chemistry teacher, in my first program of study, right? …You know, business management? He’s not associated with hotel management, which is where I am now…so it’s not like there’s a stu-dent-professor connection.”

   “Oh, okay, that does make matters less…controversial.”

   “So, it was a plain…kind of…situation. When I first visited his office at the college, I could tell he was taken with me. And I thought he was…you know, handsome and mature and…distin-guished.”

   “Yes, I’m familiar with the type. So you had this mutual attraction, each charmed with the

other. And the next thing you know he finds a well-timed opportunity to ask when you might be available for dinner or something along those lines, right?”

   “Yes, that kind of sums it up. Um, he also told me about these, kind of, social-slash-pro-fessional meetings he attends with six other professors at the college, at a reserved section of the college lounge.”

   “Oh, Vorhease is one of those colleges that have their own lounge. Nice.”

   “Um-hm. So, it’s like they do this about every three weeks or so. They sit around a big table and debate issues over their favorite cocktails. And often they invite people they know to attend to add to the discussions—you know, if it’s someone who can contribute to the ‘intellectual atmosphere,’ or sometimes just someone who enjoys being a spectator. And that’s how I came to be invited…as an observer at the dis-cussion table. Of course, anyone can take one of the tables situated around nearby.”

   “Sounds interesting. What are the other pro-fessors’ areas of expertise?”

   “Oh, they have a philosophy guy, a Western lit guy …who else, oh, and two history people—one a woman who just recently joined—and Dr. Karen Metcalf, who teaches biology.” Suddenly an inspiring thought came to Monica. “Oh, Kel-lie! You know what--?”

   “I know what you’re thinking, Monica… I’m not really sure …”

   “Oh, Kellie, please give it some thought. I know you’d enjoy it. I’ll bet you could even teach them something, sitting at the big table. See, look, it’s always on a Friday evening, starting around five-thirty or six, so that makes it easy to plan around, you know?”

   “Well, what about an invitation? Why would they want me there, I mean at their table? They don’t know me.”

   “I’ll tell Stuart that I have a friend.”

   “Okay, we’ll see. But Monica…don’t give him or any of them any of your impressions of me beforehand…I mean, I’m honored that you think I’m such…an intellectual, but I have no intention of entering those people’s debates or discus-sions. If I go, I’ll go simply as someone honored to be introduced as your friend.”

   “Fair enough, girl friend, fair enough!” The e-lation she felt was clear in Monica’s voice. Of    coffee complexion and youthful, unblemished skin, she was a very pretty young woman. When joy radiated her face and eyes, her ap-pearance was stunning. Incisively appraising her new friend, Kellie was formulating the rudi-ments of a theory that might address the issue Monica spoke of earlier, concerning her self-concept.

  

   Sitting once again at her work station the following Monday morning, Kellie thought briefly about the evening planned for the coming Wednesday. She wondered to what extent she could trust Meagan’s report concerning her date’s good looks.

 

from Story Two, "A Nice Family"

(pp.215-220)

 

   Such accounts represent approximately half of the episodes reflecting the malice of a portion of the Mooral residents. Happily, it was relative-ly a small portion.

 

   The commuter van driver steered his vehicle onward toward Mooral Park and Circle Drive which bordered it. Occupying front seats in the van, two passengers enjoyed the county-spon-sored service that shuttled them to and from work downtown, as supervised janitorial work-ers. Each was very polite in taking turns ex-pressing their thoughts to Mr. Robinson, their driver.

   “Yesterday, my radio got broke, Mr. Robin-son,” informed Mr. Heath, holding firmly to his bag lunch.

   “Oh, really. That’s too bad. What happened?”

   “I dropped it down the stairs.”

   “Yeah…I guess that would do it,” answered the driver, nodding his head.

   “I got two radios,” reported Mr. Brookings, after several seconds, looking straight ahead. It was sort of a corollary to Mr. Heath’s report. “And I got a t.v. in my room…and a fish bowl.”

   “Yes, you told us about that fish bowl, Eddie. Think you’ll ever get any fish to put in it?” As he spoke, Mr. Robinson turned onto Circle Drive.

   “Yes,” replied Eddie Brookings after some thought, contentedly terminating his reply with that one word.

   Pulling the van onto the little gravelly way leading to the edge of the Nies property, Mr. Robinson could see his last morning “pickup” sitting on the front porch, as he always did in clement weather while he awaited the shuttle’s arrival. Once Mr. Nies had boarded the van, he greeted the driver and co-passengers, and took a seat. He then sat quietly thumbing through the pages of a large book he brought with him to peruse during conversation lags on the trip and on breaks at work.

   The tome was property of the county govern-ment. But its fading contents had been thor-oughly deciphered and transcribed onto a per-manent medium by employees of Allied Print Restoration and Preservation, of which Mr. Nies was a member. Now, the book and its parched and yellowed pages were ready for incineration. However, when Mr. Nies’ eccentric penchant for reading through archaic real estate documents was discovered, he was allowed to take the led-ger home to read at his pleasure. Besides, both Mr. Nies’ employer and the county officials felt that anyone with his proven aptitude for deci-phering faded and missing print, and script, de-served to have a harmless idiosyncrasy indulg-ed.

   Mr. Nies was referred to Allied Print for em-ployment trials, five years earlier, by facilitators of the group home in which he resided at the time. Almost immediately, he stunned and a-mazed company managers with his abilities. Soon afterward he was hired full time as one of the company’s premier transcribers, or scribes.

   “Well, here’s your stop, once again, Mr. Nies,” alerted the van driver, noting the passen-ger’s preoccupation with his book.

   “Oh, thank you Mr. Robinson.” Mr. Nies hurriedly grabbed up his lunch pail and book and moved to the exit. “Good day, Mr. Robin-son. Good day, Mr. Heath. Good day, Mr. Brookings.” He had the look of a fuddled, seed-ily dressed professor with thick eyeglasses rid-ing low on his nose. “Do have a pleasant day, Mr. Brookings, Mr. Heath, Mr. Robinson.”

   “You, too, Mr. Nies. Goodbye, Mr. Nies,” the three men bidded.

 

   Once inside the building of Allied Prints, Mr. Nies would typically approach each employee mechanically though pleasantly, speaking to each in the same tone and with the same greet-ing. Unless he had to be briefed on a new set of documents ready for transcribing, he would don a fresh particle obstruction face mask and take a seat at his work desk with the high beam ad-justable light and magnifying lens apparatus. He would then fervently resume the previous day’s work of tediously and painstakingly examining and decoding the contents of decaying, archival pages.

 

   Delivering his last two passengers to their work sites, Mr. Robinson thought about the re-cent buzz in the Mooral community concerning members of the Nies family. It had even touch-ed his own household, as his two sons were overheard by him, in the prior week, quietly dis-cussing the older Nies children. Because their tone seemed to him suggestive that untoward topics were being addressed, Mr. Robinson in-terrupted. In a serious voice, he said that he hoped he and his wife had been successful in raising them to respect differences in people and not to be a party to malicious behavior—especially against anyone who meant them no harm. He decided to keep his commentary gen-eral, avoiding direct mention of the Nies family, certain that his teenaged sons were keen enough to make the connection on their own. As he reflected on the matter now, he hoped that his trust in the efficacy of subtlety was warranted.

 

   It was during the lunch period at the Mooral community’s Grove High School that a group of tenth graders huddled at their dining table chat-tering in low tones, titillated by the subject of interest. Mr. Robinson’s older boy, Cody, was among them engaged far more in listening than speaking.

   “Yeah, she’s nice looking, Matt, but she’s, like, one of those real quiet types, a home-girl, as in: likes to stay at home when she’s not at school?”

   “Doesn’t matter, Denny. In fact, that works in my favor. Look, my dad has told me all about

women, what their true nature is, you know. She’s ripe. I’m telling you, she’s ripe.”

   “I doubt that you or any body else could even get close enough to talk to her, Matt.”

   “Ronnie, my man, you forget who I am. Have-n’t I proven my magic touch with the ladies over and over…and over? ‘Son,’ listen to me. I’ve al-ready handed her my calling card. You see that fellow right across from you, Trent Brodey, there? This guy discovered something very im-portant recently and then put me on to it. Chas-tity takes kind of a long route through the park walking slowly with a few girlfriends before she branches off to go home. Now, we know that ‘lit-tle’ Addler Middle lets out ten minutes earlier than they open our doors. But, fella’s, to coun-ter that,  I made it my business on several oc-casions to be the first one down the school steps at our school’s two-forty bell, to find my way to that little eighth grade honey squad, just to get a chance to breeze by and make that magic eye contact with Chastity.”

   “Uh-oh, you gave her the ‘Matt-Eye,’ Matt?”

   “I flashed it right on her, Al…old pal. First it was just the pause-type look. Then it went to the sustained glance. Next, the stare and smile. Then came the walk up close and sen-sual ‘hi’. By now, I’m telling you, I know she’s getting warm just anticipating my next ad-vance.”

   “Awesome, dude. It’s like you said—you know ‘em!”

   “Tommy…when you’ve been schooled by a master, you can’t help but know ‘em. Girls like Chastity are just waiting for attention from someone who knows how to…give off that ani-mal energy and charm. When ‘he’ comes along, they’re just ripe for picking…like fruit, to use my dad’s term.”

   “Wow! I mean, like, triple wow, man! So, what’s the next step in, you know, getting a-round the ‘bases’?”

   “What’s next, Trent, is to feel my way through to the next phase of the game. It’s like playing a new instrument. You finger around the keys or strings until you get the sound you want.”

   “Oh, man, that is deep…exciting and deep. But, there’s one little thing. I hear she’s slow, you know. It’s like her brain doesn’t seem to fire at normal speed. My sister says her synapses are like pop…pop…pop instead of pop-pop-pop-pop-pop, you know what I mean? Oh, she’s probably not, like, out and out, retarded…she keeps up with her studies and all…well, just barely. But she’s got, like, one of the lowest averages in eighth grade. So…you don’t, like, worry about your image, like, around our school? It’ll be all over Grove High that ‘Matt’s romancing a zombie’.”

   “A legitimate concern, Denny…a legitimate concern…for sure. And that is why the plan is to keep it squarely on the low, you know. Hey, the way I see it, she’s fruit. I mean, think about it. The little pea brains at Addler Middle are fal-ling over themselves to get a peek at her un-dressed in the girl’s locker. She’s no shapeless blob, guys, we all know that. Fruit is best enjoy-ed by the first one to pluck it from the tree. So what if fruit is picked and held and savored—in secrecy? I’ll just have to find a way to verify it to you guys, my cheering section, that I got there.”

   “Wow, it must be awesome, being you,” uttered Cody Robinson in a low voice.

   “I heard that, Cody. And yes, now that I think of it…it is.”

 

   Sitting comfortably in her living room chair by the big picture window, Mrs. Gaines talked ex-uberantly on the phone with a neighbor. At the same time, she watched the little children, coming from Mooral Elementary, moving ener-getically along the park’s walkways. Always she was so pleased at the presence of the adult monitors stationed strategically throughout the area, to see the little ones safely to their destin-ations. Catching sight of the two Nies children in the distance she smiled, for she found their appearance of simple genuineness pleasing.

   Walking a little ahead of his sister, nine-year-old Victor interacted here and there with other boys his age, exchanging comments, making faces, feigning gestures of aggression, and things of the like. All the while though, he kept vigil of little sister, Faith-Marie, in her leisurely amble along side her best friend Trina Lark. Those monitors should be replaced by the police, Mrs. Gaines thought, when those older, more rambunctious kids start pouring out of school.

   When the three children appeared at the grav-elly way leading to the Nies property, watching for them as usual were the two Mrs. Nies. Mar-ta was the younger of the two, thirty-eightish of age, some fifty years younger that her grand-mother-in-law, who was the Nies children’s “great grandmother Marie,” or sometimes just “Grand-Mommy.”

   “Hi, Mommy…hi, Grand-Mommy!” shouted the Nies children.

   “Hi, there, and come give great, grandma her hug! Hi, there, Trina. Oh, and you look so pretty again today. Just an angel is what you are. Just a real life angel. Isn’t she just an angel, Marta?”

   “She is. That’s what we always say…little Trina is a angel if there ever was. Now, Victor, you go in and change out of your school clothes …okay. son? And Faith-Marie, you can play out here until Mrs. Lark come.”

   The girls played awhile in the yard as the women looked on from their places on the porch. When Trina glanced periodically at them, she also found herself giving a peek into the dimly lit house from the open front door. She could see a big cushy chair and small tables and the entranceway into an adjoining room. In a vague sort of realization, Trina’s mind register-ed that in the two weeks of her association with Faith-Marie, the two had never entered the house. Then a question materialized in her awareness.

   “Faith-Marie, do you have any toys we can play with?”